Reviews for Player
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
"oh, don't stress don't

mess don't fret

too hard."

OH GOD. it defies gorgeousity. the beat, the jiggy BEAT... :P. i love it. i adore it. it's going on my favourites list.

ps: goes very well with "braille" - regina spektor. just happened on it by chance...
Gerogerigegegareth chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
Wow your writing is so radically raw and disposed.
art by sola chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
really loved it, i know (probably too well) what that's like!
this is britt chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
this is amazing. you hit the nail on the head- the idea of a song so good that it does this to you and your mind. beautiful.
The Gobbler chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Um... wow? This is good. Great, actually. It just... flows. I could say something about rhythm or whatnot, but I don't think it would do the poem justice. If not the best I've read on this site, this is very close to it.
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Clever, oh so clever, and you really catch the reader up in the rhythm and flow of the stanzas. Very nice; you've got a good sense of beat to your words. :)
h chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
it's good
klare chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
very good. made me laugh. and very sexy.
lronMaiden chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
wow that was VERY interesting. I love how you've written it. very unique style, at least on fp.