|Reviews for Graduation Dance|
| aaaaaaaaaaaa chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
The first bit, about feeling calm, reminds me of Depeche Mode lyrics somehow!
The whole thing's really sweet. I like it.
| method acting chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Quaint. Details though, love. It's ridiculously adorable, I tell you that. And the flow is fine...but if you had delved a little more into the abstract, I may have liked it more. That's just my bias. This is well written. Nice job.
| The Love Demi Goddess chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Cute _ The ending is weak, but the rest flows beautifully. I would recommend you try and deepen the emotions that the narrator is feeling, however.
Write hard,write long,write until dawn,TLDG