Reviews for Unheard
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
You express the feeling of being unheard so well.

The title of this caught me because a while ago I wrote a cinquain called that.

Good work.


PS I love that picture you have on your profile xD!
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
this is realy great! sorry it has been awhile but I had to get my internet hooked up cuz i moved lolbut really good poem! now i have others to read lol
alluring lies chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
this poem is awesome. you are such a good poet! You just describe how i feel right now.
Lounalune chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
I love the way you describe despair in that poem. Good job!
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Very powerful stuff. I can relate to this on some incidents in my life. Great job!
hollyg20 chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
I like this. It has a very nice flow. Thanks for the reviews :) This feeling is one everyone can relate to at one time or another, I think. Thanks for putting it into words!
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
This is really powerful and moving. I like the last line! chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
i like this...the idea of hiding and wanting to be heard...all too familiar, sadly, but i like the way you've written about it. good job!

and thanks for the reviews :) i'm proud to say i now have the cd with devil in a midnight mass on it :D if you cared to know

anyways keep up the good work!
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Well I hear this poem and I like it! Very thoughtful and deep.
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
i like it. it has a nice flow to it. very nice is all i can say.