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Max was adorable, as usual. maybe Eddie isn't so bad after all. im glad that Eddie was acting sweet, for once.

-kon

Aw. That was so cute! The end bit i mean. The bit where Eddie panicked was a little scary. They are so perfect. Thank-you for the update. Do so again very soon, please!

Luv, I-B-Y-F, x

I totally loved this chapter!_ I especially liked the part where Eddie had a panic attack and Max helped him to calm down!_~ That's was so sweet!_

Hmm... When I got the alert for the new chapter it dawned to me that I still hadn't read this one..._ And then I was like; 'Why? This is a lemon! Why haven't I read that before!' Heehee!_~ And the lemon was awesome! I loved it!_

Yes, I know, a heck of a lot different then F.E.L.L., but still the same ol' me. Why change it again? One word:Boredom. That's right, in the, is it month's now?, pause between updaties, I got incredibly B-o-r-e-d. But I did write some poetry. And I found out that I still hate sour cream. Yuck.

Apart from that, more storytime! (does little dance stemming from over intake of caffeine otherwise known as chocolate) Ah! Stupendously specticublar! (Hehe. I have my own language.) Of course, wouldn't expect any less.

Funny, in all this time, I never thought about the parents. Meeting them, course. Scary, scary, scary. But he's okay! I really liked the family dynamics, really felt like there was warmth in their relationship.

Me loves Eddie more and more! (If it were possible to confangle a heart text out of this crapity computer, there'd be about 400 of them dotting that line:) Course, gotta spread the love to Maxie too! Gah. I sound like a hippie. I still think he acts like a girl, which is not in the least bit weird, it's kind of cute.

And now... (takes deep breath)

YOU MADE ME CRY!

Boy, he's still panic attacking? Ah! Heartstrings were tugged! The amount of emotion was simply blinding. And cry-inducing.

Looking much forward to the next chapter. Very soon?hinthint.

P.S.-By the way...MUHA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HEHE-WO!

Proper evily shivery inducing laughter (if the lags again, that was one MU, seven HA, one HEHE, and a long WOO!)(crosses arms smugly) Beat that.

P.P.S.-Since the "force" seems to be slow today, I'd say let the snow be with you, but I'm not that cruel. We've got more than tweleve inches on the way. PITY ME!

P.P.P.S.-(I believe I've pondered before if such a thing actually exists. What is it? Perpetually Postly Post Send?) Snow is a bad thing. It's wet, and it's also exactly -12 during the night. I need my warmth!

-Enjoy life. There's plenty of time to be dead.

My happy V-Day quote. Bye!

Wonderfully, awesomely done, as usual my dear. ) The scene with Max helping Eddie with his panic attack was so sweet and hot and... something my boyfriend would do for me. XD Yeah, speaking of which, I got a boy friend recently. P Even more inspiration to write romance. But anyhow, glad to see you haven't lost your touch. I still hold you in highest regards.

Love yaz!

-Kite

Okay, let me first say AW (insert an SHAZILLION amount of "AWs" wow..shazillion hm, anyways .

he, he I did like the scene. It must have been hard to write.

They work so nicely together. Max and Eddie though so different compliment each other very well.

Max didn't get sex in the manor? Hehe. I think Max handled the situation very well. Personally, I would join Eddie if I see him in a panic attack as well. -.-

LOVED IT! dunno if ur going to add another chappy but i loved this one.

Chrys

p.s formally sunshine knight

(insert really loud and obnoxious "aw" here). Come on, it was called for. That had to be one of the sweetest things I've read in a bloody long time. And, of course, one of the best!(heart).

Aw poor Eddie. I would be scared of the same thing. It was a good thing that Max came in when he did otherwise something bad might have happened to Eddie. Keep up the good work.

-Sniffle- That was awesome! I squealed when I saw that you had updated, I swear I did.

I'm in love with Max, oh yes I am. And his mommy and daddy were awesome, I loved them! Plus, the whole panic arrack thing was great, though it made me sad... D;

*melts* Such an incredibly sweet chapter! It was really nice to see something of Max's parents, and the panic attack-or more specifically, how Max handled it-was a great scene in particular. Excellent job, and I can't wait to see your next update!

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YAY! You finally updated! I've been giving slack since I read about the NaNoWriMo thing you were entered in or something and because I've been lax about updating my own stories, so I won't sit here and lecture you about being prompt on updating on the date that you didn't give. _

Anyway, long chapter, so at least we had something to grasp onto. I liked it. A little sappy at times for me, but good nonetheless. I loved the Eddie and Max interaction before they got to Max's house. That was adorable. With Eddie stealing the covers and everything. Cuteness all around.

And are panic attacks that bad? I get them sometimes... (or used to occassionally) but I didn't know you could lose a sense of self while having one. O_O

And I know what you're talking about with the block. I think it's writer's block season or something because I've got it, my friends got it, and now you've got it. What the hell? But it's not even me going back and reading things over and thinking they're stupid, I just can't write anything NOW, in the present, that I like. Shootiness.

Anyway, back to your story. Did they only stay a day at the mansion, palace, castle? It's nice that you made the parents nice people. I liked how you had Alan tell Max he liked Eddie in private. Made it seem more sincere to the reader as opposed to Alan just saying "I like ya, Eddie," right out in the open.

So I guess this took place before the "If That's What it Takes" chapter. I thought it was interesting how often Eddie and Max have sex. I always think that sex doesn't mean anything and that having it a lot actually means that they don't really love each other (not Max/Eddie, just couples in general) and that you're just doing it because you want to have sex and you know your partner gives it. That it's not a sign of love or that having sex is 'making love' or that doing it shows they care about each other. That's me. I have to get over that. Har har. So, needless to say, I was a bit disappointed when I read that, though, if I were a normal reader, I'd be ecstatic (and should be) because it means that they have a healthy relationship with each other and that they need and care for each other.

Bwahahahahaha! Yay for dementedness.

I'm really glad you're back to writing. I've been reading "White Hot" over and over ever since you stopped writing for that period (sometimes the whole thing, sometimes I just skipped to the good parts) and I read "If That's What it Takes" over too. I haven't read the first one over since I still pretty much remember it from the first time I read it. Anyway, great job with this chapter! I hope you crank out some more masterpieces soon!

Love!

Aikida

p.s. Sophomoric is a totally awesome word that I fittingly learned in a sophomore vocabulary quiz *after* we'd spelled it wrong on our homecoming posters. We spelled it Sophmore. And we spelled Freshmen, Freshman (as in only one freshman, woot) and we spelled Juniors, Juniers. I was going more for... Joonyers, so it was more obvious that we were doing it on purpose, but heaven forbid Ms. Pompom Individualistic listen to anything I say. And Seenyurs. But no, again. Hahaha. Screw school spirit anyway. Oh well! That's my horrible high school story for now!