Reviews for Take Me or Leave Me
cupxofxfools chapter 3 . 12/7/2006
That was fabulous porn, my dear. Absolutely smashing. *brain explodes*
another-happy-ending chapter 3 . 11/22/2006
Whoah. That was a good lemon. -grin-

I also liked that fight scene.

I like the way you are doing this sequel. Original [maybe a bit lazy. :p nah.] and really interesting.

A insight into the every-day lives of Max and Eddie.

I like it.
Insomiak chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Just... AW xD Ima make t a longer review afterness, but I gotta go... SO UPDATE. (heart)
stripedsocksarecool chapter 3 . 11/9/2006
Well, I liked it. And I loved the previous chapters, and all of Act I. Here's to hoping you update soon *Raises glass of sparkling grape juice*
Switch chapter 3 . 11/7/2006
As a person who has read quite a few bad sex scenes in her time, I can honestly say that this was really weel written in my opinion. I liked where you put in their thoughts and things like that. It made it much more intimate and a lot less smut. Though honestly, I think it would be mroe interesting to hate them be more physical when they normally interact instead of just having a whole chapter devoted to a sex scene. While it is appreciated (Because I've been wanting to scream "Just FUCK ALREADY!" since like chapter 5 of Act I) Anywaym it really seems like their relationship lacks physical affection and while this is great, it would be nice to see it less intense and more often! _
VioletGame chapter 3 . 11/3/2006
I think it was pretty good for a lemon. Very...descriptive *smirks* you have talent, you really do. Plaese update as soon as you can, m'kay?
7272 chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
I just wanted to say thanks. I've enjoyed their romance and can't wait to read more.
Luciver chapter 3 . 10/8/2006
I read Act I, and this this weekend, and I am in love. LOVE I SAY! It's very well written, and the drama in chapter two of this kept the angst dragon quite happy indeed.

But! I do have some questions. I might be wrong, but I don't think that Eddie has told Max he loves him yet. Which makes me sad. Also, you're going to explain what happened to Max's soccer career, right?

I can't wait to read it. I love this story.
Kizuna chapter 2 . 10/4/2006
Good chapter!_ I'm sitting in an ice cold classroom right now, and I know how Max's feeling...! It's freezing here...!_
Kizuna chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Haha, so nice, so nice!_ I just love those two!_
Siyaa chapter 3 . 9/12/2006
Meh, I don't think you're so bad at writing them. - Yeah, this comes from the weirdo who read an Inuyasha lemon. Which was actually very well written(yes, there was some story plot in it -). And I lurved the last two chapters as well. I think your way of doing this sequal is rather unique(least, I haven't read any like this). I am now an official stalker. You will see me often. ;P
LightYourPath chapter 3 . 9/12/2006
It's amazing how things work. I read a chapter of "Act I" when it only had two chapters and thought "Oh, I'd better get to it again later" Then I lost it :( then I found it again through Shadow! haha

I love Max and Eddie :) They're adorable together and I can relate to some of their characteristics. I'm def more of an Eddie though :p

I don't know why, but the second chapter struck to me the most. It seemed real and I just really liked it. 8o

Btw, are you a fan of Rent? Because "Take Me or Leave Me" is... ;)
Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose chapter 3 . 9/9/2006
Excuse me? CAN'T write these? You've got to be kidding me. I'm going to go faint...again...*faints and squeals fangirl style*
Midnights Scream chapter 3 . 8/26/2006
*nods* I am sorry, but some othe things about your lemon bother me like the (kisses), (quiet) that you had to put before we already understand what going on and I think that ruins it a little, but anyway there's only three chapters, but so far so good though I'm going to find it interesting how you keep the two going
Lidyah chapter 3 . 8/19/2006
You CAN write sex scenes and you must write more very soon. Such a great sequel :)
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