Reviews for Tattered Souls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a wonderful story! You write beautifully, and its such an original vamp fic! I really like, cant wait for an update |
![]() ![]() very well written!i loved it!(I almost cried.)but it was awesome! |
![]() ![]() wow!that was awesome!great job! it was very thrilling to read and intense!can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, please update! I NEED to see what will happen to Raphie and Hector! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, I love this story! I have only read the first chapter and am already in love with it! Update soon1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story! |
![]() ![]() This story was very great,keep it ,your chapter is isn't end this story,ok? |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a cliff hanger at the end of chapter 5! the overall plot of your story is fantastic. the fact that you actually took the idea of a vampire and changed it to your liking is good thinking. by making it different from the other vampire stories, you spark interest. this is also coming along as a good yaoi. just a little note on your story, in the beginning you had it said that someone finding their Only didn't happen everyday and yet you had almost ever vampire already having their Only. this is a bit conflicting in plot. by having everyone have an Only, it brings about the answer that finding your Only is not rare and is expected for all vampires, see if you can work in something contradicting that. i look forward to seeing how their relationship develops. good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finished the story some time ago. I would read it when i had nothing better to do. Please do continue i would love to find out what happens to the two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I read it and i would love for you to continue if you would. I would love to hear more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy cow you are an amazing writer. I was looking through stories and found this, started reading it and was hook half way through the first chapter. I became even more enraptured when the werewolves came into the story and vicious fight almost broke out between werewolves and vampires. I did notice a few errors here and there, but they were only small ones that are easily fixed. Like, in some places a word was left out but I could easily figure out what word should go there. Some words were misspelled, and in some places were 'to' when it should've been 'too.' Other than that this is an amazing story! Poor Raphie, all hysterical. And then Hector! Poor guy must be heartbroken to see Raphie hate him so! Please continue this! I want to know what happens next because yes I've read it all already. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could you please please update this story? It's AMAZING. So please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please please please update soon... please...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, please, please update soon. I'm dying to find out what happens and I'm not the only one! If you will not finish the story then why don't you pass it over to another writer (I'll even take it if you wish) tell them some of your ideas on what will happen and let them finish it. They will write that it was all your idea in the beggining of each chapter. Of course I like to hear it from you. |
![]() ![]() yeah that was amazing u should continue it |