Reviews for Tattered Souls
In-a-fiction-world chapter 5 . 1/28/2009
THAT WAS FRICKIN AMAZING! The story is sucking me in with every word and I really hope to read more of them VERY soon!
Kyosetsuki chapter 5 . 1/2/2009
w.o.w this story is amazing... .. i mean.. seriously!. lol

i havent read such a good story in a long time.

it was so nice to read, and i just cant wait for more!

please continue!

ja ne!
PixieStyx chapter 5 . 12/30/2008
I just joined FictionPress just so that I could review this story. I NED to know what happens in this story. I know it was written two (nearly three) years ago but I just found it and I've been going nuts for the past three days wanting to know what happened after this. This story is awesome its amazing it has all the elements a good vampire story should have! So please have mercy on me and finish or at least maybe post a synopsis of what happens. Pretty please! You're killing me here!
theauthor94 chapter 5 . 12/25/2008
Oh no! i hope Hector gets out ok! You have to update soon1!
theauthor94 chapter 4 . 12/25/2008
I love this! I feel so bad for Hector! Wah! I hope that him and Raphie get together!
theauthor94 chapter 2 . 12/21/2008
oh my gosh! I love this! Its a lot better than my stuff. I hope you update soon!
kiki chapter 5 . 10/5/2008
update?
phoenix chapter 5 . 7/18/2008
OMG! I love it!

I'd also love to read the finished version!

You had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen...!
Fluffy Cotton Ball chapter 5 . 7/9/2008
;3; Oh goodness. This story is so amazing. ;n; I wish there was more to read. ;u;

This is so interesting and different from other vampire stories I've read.
BloodiedFangs chapter 5 . 4/12/2008
amazing story, i've always loved vampire stories, but this is fab. i love it lol. can't wait to find out what happens next :D
Midnight Star666 chapter 5 . 4/4/2008
omg i love this story. its such a nail biter. could you please continue.
Sidekick59 chapter 5 . 3/16/2008
Interesting story. It was very captivating, however I noticed you used a lot of ellipses. It seemed eve to be a bit like overkill. I realise that it fits the emotion of the story at the moment but they are other ways to express silence and breaks in speech.

The story is over all very good though and I look forward to reading more.
Oi-You chapter 5 . 3/16/2008
This story is a very good one. I hope you will update soon.
efphrim chapter 5 . 2/2/2008
Plz tell me your going to have more.
DemonChipmunk chapter 5 . 1/27/2008
Wow! This is great! Please continue the story!
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