Reviews for Tattered Souls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS FRICKIN AMAZING! The story is sucking me in with every word and I really hope to read more of them VERY soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() w.o.w this story is amazing... .. i mean.. seriously!. lol i havent read such a good story in a long time. it was so nice to read, and i just cant wait for more! please continue! ja ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just joined FictionPress just so that I could review this story. I NED to know what happens in this story. I know it was written two (nearly three) years ago but I just found it and I've been going nuts for the past three days wanting to know what happened after this. This story is awesome its amazing it has all the elements a good vampire story should have! So please have mercy on me and finish or at least maybe post a synopsis of what happens. Pretty please! You're killing me here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! i hope Hector gets out ok! You have to update soon1! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! I feel so bad for Hector! Wah! I hope that him and Raphie get together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh! I love this! Its a lot better than my stuff. I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() update? |
![]() ![]() OMG! I love it! I'd also love to read the finished version! You had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;3; Oh goodness. This story is so amazing. ;n; I wish there was more to read. ;u; This is so interesting and different from other vampire stories I've read. |
![]() ![]() amazing story, i've always loved vampire stories, but this is fab. i love it lol. can't wait to find out what happens next :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i love this story. its such a nail biter. could you please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. It was very captivating, however I noticed you used a lot of ellipses. It seemed eve to be a bit like overkill. I realise that it fits the emotion of the story at the moment but they are other ways to express silence and breaks in speech. The story is over all very good though and I look forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is a very good one. I hope you will update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plz tell me your going to have more. |
![]() ![]() Wow! This is great! Please continue the story! |