You need to write more. Seriously, this is like the best thing I've read all night and I've read some pretty good things.

The descriptions in this are well done. And the story itself is so interesting that I can only wish that you will continue with it.

Hiya :P

I would love to serenade you with praises, telling you (in detail) how wonderful this story is, and how enrapturing your characters and plot are but I have temporarily gone stupid ( for lack of a better word) and am too lazy to motivate my reluctant imagination into giving you a detailed review.

But I would like to say that this really is a good story. It is well written and the way the plot goes, it makes you want to read more to find out what happens next. I can't wait to see the development of Raphie and patience really isn't one of my greater virtues _

Please update... soon :P

This is wonderful! I know every writer wants to hear this, but you really deserve it. I mean, DAMN. This is better than better. The story fits extremely well, and the details! Ah, the details...They're awesome. I don't want to sound like a whiney bitch on the first review, but whenever the get the chance, you have to update! kthxbye.

Stumbled upon this story, and now in love with it. I love the discriptions and the interwining of everyone's little plotlines into the larger one. Don't see that all too often done with such percision.

Keep up the good work and hope to read from you soon.

Peace.

~tdw

Wow! Normally I am not into "modern day vampire" stuff, but your story really got me hooked, I mean, it is amazing and I can't remember "stumbling" into such scenario before. You have great skill for both description and building characters. Update soon, please

I just read all 5 chapters and I love this! Please Please Please add more, I rarely follow stories but I'm hooked on this, it seems like it has potential to get very interesting.

~Lor Lor