|Reviews for Kiss the Frogman|
| Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Aw. I don't mean to sound condescending, but it was almost...cute. I mean, it obviously wasn't "cute," it was just very sweet in a way. You know, even with the damning reflection and withered skin, it was somehow...beautiful and innocent seeming I guess? I'm discovering that, in a few of the poems of yours that I've read, the last three lines are the best and most beautiful. The same was true in this one.
| Leo Eigenmann chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Wow, again... nice narrative poem. It trells a story, a unique fairy tale put into poetry. Nice ideas you have here, they seem to be creative.
| onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
HAHha... The title pulled me in.. XD And the read was worth checking into. This story is very differnt from how I would have expected it to go.. it was more creative and inovating. Very good visuals too. Like rubber arms, putting ads up in fairy tales (XD), and the last line completes everything wonderfully. Good job!