Reviews for Mary
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Aw. This is really sad. I love how you put a quote in. I love the imagery. It's really really sad thought. The feeling of helplessness and desperation is so strong and raw but displayed in such a clear, cutting format. I love the begining. It really draws me in. My favorite lines were "nail polish flaking/off fingers scarred/and she said:" It just sounded like... a waterfall. The way it flowed. Bravo.