Reviews for Newton's Third
Unfairy chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I like this, I once wrote a Haiku about The Newton laws, in fact, one for each.
boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
This was excellent. I love the first four lines. You are a writer of many talents.
just dani chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
oo i like this a lot. the title is clever and perfect for this! keep writing
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Aww. I love this. And the title is cute. This whole piece is just so... lovable. It gives you a warm fuzzy feeling inside, you know? I love the part "I tell you it's wrong/and you ask me what's right." It's such a funny contrast. I love people who kind of round us off a bit, kind of complete us. Haha that sounds so corny. But yeah, I think everyone has someone who kind of equals them out. Wow. I am being SO repeptitive. Haha. Anyway, great job. I love this.
InkandIntrospection chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
I enjoyed the comparison of this piece to Newton's Third Law. Very effective and it definitley caught my attention.