Reviews for Lost and Found
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
really good haiku!
hollyg20 chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Great job at a first shot at a haiku. It is challenging to fit everything you have to say into 17 syllables but you do it well :) Keep up the good work.
classic violet chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Wow, this is actually really good. I like it.
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
Its like a walking contradiction. Cool!
Leeona Trance chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
Short and powerful. I love it.

~Leeona Trance
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
i like it. its like even though you are chained you will still walk. all in all i liked it
BearClaw chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
very intersting ... i like it alot ..short and sweet...
autumn berrington chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
great first haiku! i made my first haiku yestarday also. they can sometimes be difficult to make. _ i like how how it feels confused.

Basara chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
...saddening thoughts loom in your haiku... )

kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Very good D! Short and to the point. Very deep meaning in just a few words.I get it.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Pretty good for a first haiku. I liked that it was mostly emotion, but I still got some imagery from the line 'in shackles'. Great work, look foward to seeing more.

Peace, Daze
The Postscript chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Great first haiku! I hope you continue to try these out and experiment some more. You have a nice start. Keep writing, s.