Reviews for The Satin Heart
Allis Dalline chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Ah, sweet simplicity...So few words, yet so beautiful! Nicely done.
Let It Rain chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
I like this poem, and I love the format. I might use it sometime, if you don't mind :) I think the best part about it is you don't have to worry about syllables!

Keep writing!
Sarrasanne chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
This has very good description (i like 'ardent') and the delicatness of her 'satin heart' gets through very well.

luv, Sa
With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Ouch. This poem caused me physical pain. But in a good way. You've used your words perfectly to depict an organ so delicate that even the lightest touch can tear it to the point of bleeding. Then, of course, you tie this delicateness into the simile of emotion. The whole poem is a success. Nice job.