That was cute. The pacing of the story is nice. I'm getting a feel for the characters, especially Jon, and you're revealing just enough at the right times to keep me interested. I am oh-so-curious about the history or non-history of Sebastian and Jon. I also wonder what will happen at this strange reunion.

I really liked the story and thought why not more reviews? It's good, wish ya had more stories...like this one

You have a very interesting writing style. It is very descriptive, but it doesn't go on and on and on. Keep up the good work, on to the next chapter!

Dang, I knew the names sound so commonplace in my country. Do you happen to be Filipino, too? Anyway, interesting local color. Just sayin'. I look forward to reading the rest :D

Well, I'll have to say that this is another interesting story from you. btw, is this a prelude to Ever After Are For Kids? I'm thinking about this because you actaully used the same characters from there... erm so yeah, guess that's the case. Anyway, this chapter really did well in introducing the characters although I guess you may want to improve the portrayl of the characters. Anyway, nothing much of a CC to say here except it's a good job done. I think I'll have to go now. I've got something on soon. Going to watch Harold And Kumar Escape From Guantanamo Bay. On a sidenote, I've watched the first movie and I virtually go lmao lol! XD

P.S: Thanks very much for your review on Elven Chronicles. I really hope you can review another of my story Bloodfire soon although it's only one chapter since I'm planning to update this one next. ;)

the ending was too funny! i really love jons personality! cant wait to read futher. great job on the story.

yay! I liked this story, and I'm happy for the happy ending! Is the next one going to be the drama with Marc and Paolo, or will there be a new beaux for our Marcy boy?

i have to admit i was EXTRMELY skeptical in reading this story. but i loved it!

gorgeous story!

Its completed! *sniffs* I'm so happy! haha... I like the ending. Aw... the sweet happy endings. I love sweet happy endings. Sebastian and Jon are finally together. Thanks for the story. You're the best.

Well at least he got closure and things can only get better hopefully.

wow... that's all I really have to say is wow. I wasn;t too sure on how much I was going to favour this story, but I favour it a lot~ I can't wait for the next update~

only one more chapter left? No!

This story is too short, and I'm going to miss jon and Sebastian :-)

I really liked the story, it had a bitter sweet kind of feeling... I hope to see more stuff from u in the future, cause I absolutely adore your writing style.

good story

NO! It can't be over! Cause the story is so GOD!

Anywho, that was a great chapter, and have I mentioned lately how much I love this story? If not, I DO!

Sincerely,

Your reader:

~Myssez~

wow. Love the story, and that punch was...wow.

I hope things work out between Sebastion and Jon.

anywho, hope to see more.

~Myssez~