|Reviews for The Hell Hound|
| Radio Saturday chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
I enjoyed this story. I liked the tone of it and I liked the story a lot.
However, I thought that it read almost like an outline - like you were trying to crystallize the plot and setting in your mind. It didn't seem to me that any of the characters were really developed. None of them seemed to have much character, and you could have built a lot of character into several of them, like the wizard, the couple and even the teenagers and grandchildren.
Still, though, I enjoyed it. But, although brevity can be a virtue, in this case it seemed like too much of a good thing. I liked it, but I kind of wanted more.
Also, if you get a chance, check out some of my stories.
| living-out-a-sacrifice chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Awesome. Def. one of the better things I've found on this site. Seal of approval from me.