awsome!

write more or I will do some thing [ I don't know yet].

ya!

Silver-Raven-Wings ;

wow harsh but yet so true no one wants to amit it but weve done the unthinkable one time to many its a shame to us all that we all have to hear i thank u for spelling it out to us all in a term we can all hear :D

yeah i really liked it, it really put your message across well congrats, its really good.

That was great. It's one of the best poems that I've seen lately... until now, I had nothing on my favorite stories list. Congratulations.

that is...amazing.

truly. kudos to you on being able to write!