Reviews for Reunited Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Please please please please update soon, Please?I like it coz its easy to read when you just want a nice story to get into. I really wanna know more!Please! :DLove Ashleigh Elaine |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww so sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good! Please, update! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite liked this. The idea was what drew me in, and I'd love to read more about what actually goes on between Alex and Isabelle. My only problem was in regards to the restaurant. I don't want to sound snotty, but I'm a trained waitress, and if Fidelio's is a sucessful restaurant catering to the wealthy, it's highly unlikely a waitress would walk up to a table and simply say "Welcome! Are you ready to order?" They'd be quite professional, saying things such as "Good Evening sir/madam", and they'd also try to make a sale by suggesting meals and wines, rather than just taking an order. And when they left, she'd probably be more likely to ask how their meal was and say good night rather than just simply saying "thanks and come again soon." (She actually probably would have checked up on them throughout the meal, but that's a minor detail :P)Also, I'm sure she'd be wearing a name badge. :) Anyway, that's just me being picky, but this was rather good. I like the suddenness of Alex inviting Isabelle to a party when Angie had been the obsessed one and all. I also like the line about Alex being obsessed with chick flicks. I had a little giggle there. And although Alex comes across as your average egotistical celebrity, using cheesy lines like "a beautiful name for a beautiful girl", I definitely think there's something deeper to him. I'll be keeping an eye out for a new post. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya. Love the story. Cannot wait to read the next chapter! -CIR |
![]() ![]() ![]() Extremely well written. I enjoyed every moment I read it and craved for more. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh cute... I am in love with this story already! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I like the beginning. The story has a lot of potential. Update soon. P.S. Could you find and put up pictures for the characters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story so far. Is this just a prolouge first? |
![]() ![]() I really like the beginning of this story! I'd be really interested to see where you take it! Update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, you really got a promising story going on. I mean, seriously! I love it! LOVEE IT! Although I'd like to see some shock on Izzy's friend's face when she told her whom she was going on a date with... Haha. Rich, baby, rich. Update soon, neh? |
![]() ![]() you've got a great beginning. I can't wait for the next chapter. ) |
![]() ![]() so i love stories like these... there was a slight typo...is his name supposed to be alex or ryan? i was also wondering if you're going to go into more detail about them 'falling in love'? well that's about it...can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() Nice beginning. You need to fix a "typo." In the beginning you call him "Alex" and then later "Ryan." |