I think this is the third time I read this. Still love it!

GAAAAHHH! IT's Jordan again, in a real account now. I'm rereading this for the sixth time. This really is a AWWWWEEESSSOMMMEE book! I LOVE IT! IF you publish it, I will most certainly try to get it...I love your story...Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

I absolutely loved this story. It's heartfelt, beautiful and a masterpiece. RIP SARA

Love the absolute zero reference

You know what? You are just amazing.

I love how the story started and how it ended, it was bittersweet. I actually shed a tear at the end, something that doesn't normally happen unless the ending was incredibly tragic. I'm no saying your ending was tragic, no. The end was just right. It felt right in so many ways.

Thank you good author for writing this.

This story, quite frankly, sucks.

It's full of Mary and Gary Sues, and lacks any character development at all. Where is the PLOT? The CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT? Really, the anything unique from tossed trash?

The title? What does it have to do with anything?

Plot? Nonexistent. A title that makes sense? N

I don't understand why I ever liked this story.

It's ch

The story is remarkably cliched and predictable. It has the typical supersmart sarcastic prodigies and high school setting like many other stories.

Still, it is written with very good spelling and grammar. Also, though the characters are not very original, I like their personalities and the plot, though it is almost nonexistent.

NOOO. She died.
(unhappy ending)
Great story, other than the dying part.

it was...nice. wonderful. I'm sad that it's done, even though it was already completed.

and... you killed Sara off! my favorite! me go mope about that.

yay! i finally understand what the list-thingy meant.

fun!
love the know how i feel about the multiple povs though.

Wow, this story was amazing :D I don't know what I was expecting when I clicked this story, but I was hooked from the first chapter! Brilliant plot lines and characters, I just loved all of it :D!

I cried. I cried so, so much.

It was just amazingly beautiful. I can't even describe how much I loved it.

Usually I hate sad endings, especially when I really begin to love the characters (as I did with yours), but in this one...it was just beautiful. Especially the finishing line. "But then, that was how they would have wanted it."

The idea of their legacy remaining...and I'm crying again. Oh god. I literally got trapped within your story, I've been on my computer for a solid seven hours. I was berating myself before, but I eventually realised that I don't regret it at all. The story was worth it.

But...whew. Such and emotional rollercoaster. And the part about Gabriel going on to search for the cure to ALL...it just all melded so beautifully. Congratulations.

I've forgotten my log in, so if you want to reply or anything (not that I expect you to) my email is

Thanks for sharing this amazing story.

very interesting story. wish you'd write more on this site or any other. :)