Reviews for A Cliche in Training
lilxseeker chapter 17 . 9/12/2006
O0O0O update soon please, this story is great! i love taylor! hehe
Misty Moonweb chapter 17 . 9/12/2006
This was a great chapter and tell babablacksheep to get a f* life. You're doing an excellent job so don't let anyone bring you down.
incandescente chapter 17 . 9/12/2006
some ideas that gets the story moving and interesting. eg. the father being gay, etc. heh.

mm. i found the last part quite funny. yay they're gonna end up together and discover that they're perfect for each other! :)
Right or Ryn chapter 17 . 9/11/2006
Haha! Go Carter! He's got that evil (but well intentioned) older brother matchmaker thing going on for him. I honestly didn't think he'd get that coniving. Now the only problem would be that Terri/Taylor wouldn't think that the other really liked them and was only going out with the other person because of the deal and someone will end up getting hurt. (does that make any sense?)

Please just get them together! Make them have a magical kiss at the dance and profess their undying love for one another. I love happy endings.
Right or Ryn chapter 16 . 9/11/2006
Just get them together for Pete's sake! I get so frustrated when characters are so blind and oblivious. Even Carter knows. He gave his blessing for cryin out loud! And Alex is an asshole. Yeah he's sorry now after he hit her about the reprecutions, and he'd probably be really sorry again the next time he hit her if they continued going out. How come he didn't get suspended for at least more than one day? HE PUNCHED A GIRL! And he grabbed Lily and made her faint. The coward. Let me at him!
Right or Ryn chapter 8 . 9/11/2006
Taylor, you just got the bro's blessing! Go ask her before she gets too attached to Alex! (this is me ranting at the characters that obviously can't hear me but I've got to rant at somebody, so why not their creator?)
One Desire chapter 17 . 9/11/2006
This chapter seemed to be a bit of filler, yeah? But I did like the ending of it. When's the Winter Formal? Or rather, what chapter do you plan on having the Winter Formal?
jinx89 chapter 17 . 9/11/2006
Yay! You updated! Lovely chapter. I like how you're bringing in Carter in to all of this. It's kind of subtle so that Taylor and Terri wouldn't really notice it but still makes a huge difference. Are you in advanced English classes? You should be because even I'm in them and I don't write anywhere this good. Hint, hint, that's a compliment lol.
Right or Ryn chapter 3 . 9/11/2006
I looked at the picture on your page and Taylor is hottie. A MAJOR hottie. I want to die right now. *swooning*
Twinkle Star Bell chapter 17 . 9/11/2006
MMUHA! I'm starting to love the way Carter thinks. I agree totally with his idea. I love how you introduced it in a cliche way but it was still different. The brotehr suggesting it is usually abnormal. So I give you claps for that. I really liked it. Update soon. This story is uber uber good!
Cara Deanna chapter 17 . 9/11/2006
it was a good chapter please update soon
Saniaaa chapter 17 . 9/11/2006
kewl chappie. hehe, carter's so evil! wonder what was in the bag...can't wait for more!

P.S. how many chappies does this story have?
LethargicLove NLI chapter 17 . 9/11/2006
Aw, soo cute. I was so mad while reading about Terri and Carter's dad. I was like "OMFGBASTARD!". Tay is soo cute. I just want to cuddle him
rockMus chapter 17 . 9/11/2006
I know ive said this but ill say it again "I luv this story!" Great chapter can't wait for this wanted to kno is it hard to write a story while going to school?
Kirstyrah chapter 17 . 9/11/2006

So, i really like this story! Usually i start reading a story on here and get bored within 2 or 3 chapters and give up, but i stuck with this one and i'm glad i did!

I dont know what it is - the characters, the plot, both... - but something drew me into the story and is keeping me there!

I like the whole over-protective brother bit, because even though i dont have one of my own, my friend does (she has 8 older brothers!) and its cool seeing how every single one of those guys stick up for her, especially declan (the one closest to her in age.)

I love Taylor! he seems like the sweetest guy ever, and reminds me a LOT of my friend Jamie... they basically have the same personality.

So this is probably the longest review ive ever written, what i'm trying to say is keep it up, i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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