Reviews for A Cliche in Training chapter 2 . 8/4/2006
First of all, I really enjoy your writting style and your characters.

Seocnd, I would like to offer you a tip. I feel that you would attract more attention to your story if you take out the words "I hate summaries" from your summary for the story. Many readers are instantly turned off by this statement and don't even bother to read it. I usually would have skipped over this story too because of this phrase but for some odd reason I did not and I'm thankful. I think it is a great story and even if you feel the summary is bad, do not state it. You have two lines to sell your story, don't ruin it with this deadly phrase. It gives off a bad impression, and in your case, a wrong impression.

Anyways, keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more!
Twinkle Star Bell chapter 9 . 7/27/2006
I love this story. It's so good and so much better than I expected. I really like Taylor. He seems really cool and nice. I love the picture of him on your author page. He is HOT! Anyway, Alex is okay. I guess he's okay but he doesn't seem to have much depth and care that much about Terri as Taylor does. Well update soon. I do hope that Taylor and Terri end up together. They would make such a cute couple! UPDATE SOON!
See For chapter 9 . 7/27/2006
HOLY (massive amounts of random symbols here) IS TAYLOR SMOKING HOT IN THAT PICTURE OR WHAT! But really, that was quite the cute chapter. Update soon!
Misty Moonweb chapter 9 . 7/27/2006
Yay! _ Another update! (does funky chicken) You're right, overprotective brothers are cool. It's nice to know you'll always have someone to watch over you no matter what. Taylor's really funny _ He thinks he's all slick, spying on them and pretending he didn't do anything. But he's oh, so sweet! Probably if I get a boyfriend like that, my brothers will first...Lol...Nice little chapter you have here. I always like these little scenes.
chic rebel chapter 9 . 7/27/2006
aww totally cute. i definietly like taylor more than alex though alex seems like a good guy. so update soon!
incandescente chapter 9 . 7/27/2006
i love this story! :) really, i'm serious. man, taylor sounds real cute! and its funny how terri calls asses "donkeys." i shall try that and disarm my friends. haha. chapter 9 . 7/27/2006
great chapter once again. I cannot wait for Terri POV and find out why she was really drinking chapter 8 . 7/26/2006
she terri has proven that she could defend herself against guys but somehow i don't feel that carter will back off soon.

and does carter know how Taylor feels? I hope so but only another chapter will tell

keep up the great work! I'm really enjoying this story!-Alex chapter 5 . 7/26/2006
“Party? Dude, we’re going to the movies.”haha...i loved this line chapter 3 . 7/26/2006
aw, taylor likes her
icequeen401 chapter 8 . 7/26/2006
good chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
i'm really liking this soo far.
Misty Moonweb chapter 8 . 7/26/2006
Here I am again, reviewing just for you _ I didn't even think that Carter knew about them liking each other. Great chapter. Update soon!
Misty Moonweb chapter 7 . 7/26/2006
And I love you for updating _ Once I start to review for stories, I never stop. You can always count on me no matter what! I can really relate to Terri. My brothers treat me the same way. They told me I can't date until I'm married. Weird, huh... Interesting chapter. I can definitely feel the tension!
See For chapter 8 . 7/26/2006
Ahahah, Taylor's such an idiot. xD
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