|Reviews for Untitledxfor nowx|
| DarKissD chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
...Wow. I think I love this.
Yes, yes. Wow. Short, sweet, mystery, to the point and oh so vague.
If I may be so kind as to ask... No, wait, later. Email me, please? I have a proposition for you. Albeit a small one, that you could refuse without regretting easily. But please do email me.
| Lady Glass chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Wow, this was amazing. I could definitely see where the FLB inspiration came from but it is an amazing poem on its own, the imagery was fantastic. I loved it!
Much love and BIG KISSES,
We Miss You Steve Irwin!
If you were a mermaid, you said, If you were a mermaid, I was the sea.
| the-foresight chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
I loved that, especially the "pig lover girls" line. Really good imagery. I liked the way you had one word on the last line as well. brings out its significance.
| Weed In The Rose Garden chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
i like this a lot, it sounds like the life of many people, always spinning and all the lies...i loved the way the poem was wrote, its a kind of format (spelling? haha sorry) you dont see much. i really liked the line(s) 'Shattered dreams promises Broken' keep up the good work!
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
the imagery is amazing! keep this up this is seriously wicked! adds to faves