Reviews for Imperfection
theoretically beautiful chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
you deffinatley have a knack for haikus. great job!

~the bandit quen
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
I dont know who i am,either. you good at these things...but cheer up! go on a massicre.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
While this isn't a fantastic haiku, its very relatable which makes me like it. Well done.
theory of black chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
I've felt like this a lot lately. It's very depressing. Good job with this.
Phoenix.Syndrome chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Wow...for such a short poem, this is really strong.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Powerful. But sad. :( Write on!

tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
so apologetic,... yet you owe no one... nice poem
Basara chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
well,all humans are imperfect...trying to be perfect...

kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
Oh so sad! Where is Teddy Bear when you need him? :)Good D!
Leeona Trance chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
This mirrors my feelings exactly. I hope whatever made you feel this way goes away; I wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy.

~Leeona Trance