Reviews for Akari: Taishoku Awai no Yoroi
zephyrlight chapter 2 . 7/8/2006
hmm.. other than the random grammar mistakes, I have to say that this story has a fantastic beginning of a plot line o.o update soon?

and yea, I'm from Hyakuji o.o
Haze chapter 2 . 7/7/2006
You've got an awesome story going Blaze, keep it up! I can't wait to read more!
a creature chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
intersting. keep up and i'll see what happens. it seems good so i'll read it
Yoichiro Sakamoto chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Wow! You have a nice story here so far! I love it! I shall contiune to read! *reads more*
Spirit Tigress chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Get the next chapter up asap! I'll put you in my favs so I can keep up with your updates!
FoxyGrampa chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Hmm. Seems interesting. I like the girl's coloring, btw. xD Blue hair and brown eyes~ Since I've had that before. (In my own coloring, I mean.)

Consider in anothrr story to put a prologue, then put the rest of the chapter. It introduces us to the story more, and keeps our intrest for the next chapter.

But other than that, I saw no definite faults in writing. ;D Looking forward to when you update~
Darket chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
I don't have much to say... Well, what does the title mean in english? I'll be around. Sorry if this review seems brief.

Peace, Love, Triangle

Darket