Reviews for Farria
IwasSmitten chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
This is a good story with good dialogue and plenty of action. Some of the names and minor details seemed a little..odd. Like, Blake sounded too English of a name for someone living in the Middle East. It's suspenseful in that I know there must be an underlying story that you haven't explained yet, and everything is building up. I hope you expand this.