Reviews for The Six Warriors |
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WitchGhost chapter 4 . 8/9/2006 Yeah chelle new chapter! Did you change the title or was this the original? The Six Weapons I have to say is not good nope...I thought it was called six warriors, but oh nevermind. |
Ishte chapter 3 . 7/24/2006 This is a really good beginning. I was actually a bit annoyed at Dagger at first (she sorta reminds me of my cousin, don't ask) but the story is getting along nicely. I really like Bow and Arrow, they're very charming, if not a little bit deviant. And the birthmark on Arrow... very thing that I was a little confused about was when Knife was thinking in the beginning of the third chapter. Maybe you should put her thoughts in italics or something, because I had to read it twice before I got that it was actually her thoughts.I look forward to chapter 4. |
WitchGhost chapter 3 . 7/23/2006 A new chapter and more characters! Oh just to mention you changed Arrow's name to Archer then back to Arrow again. |
WitchGhost chapter 2 . 7/17/2006 Well I think they might be three iof the six new warriors? Anyway good chapter! |
WitchGhost chapter 1 . 7/4/2006 Yeah good work chelle though I don't think lidded is the right word, but most likely it is, I'm so bad with words. Anyway I liked it so on to the next one! |