Reviews for The Jump
Burnt Bread chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Another update so soon? It's safe to expect more frequent updates in the future?

I've read this before - you're updating it?

This version (if i remember correctly) seems to be less abstract, are you preparing to write a longer piece about it? Or will it remain a oneshot? I like the twist, it's very clever... I think i said that last time too. Like your work, keep it comming.

Bread.