WONDERFUL...a bit rough around some edges and could use a little more emotion but I loved it. I I also liked how you let the readers decide if they wanted Hikaru to be a man or a woman, but wither eway the person you described was beautiful...So sad and yet addictiong. LOVED IT!

Wow. At first I thought that was a bit sketchy and confusing, but then the end made it all make sense. :PI read this right after catching your email. Heh Yup, this's Amai mi Kota.. yea. . Haha Well done well done~! You could probably smooth it out a bit more, but I liked the way you choose. :D I look forward to more. :PQuite a twist to that ending~ Yay~!

hi! this is jackie, btw...i made an account. so...I like it. kinda confusing. is hikaru a girl? or is this a gay-love story? other than that...is the whole thing pretty much a flash back? hmm...that was all I had questions on...