|Reviews for The Beating Heart: A collection of Poems|
| Raymond Lamar Gilstrap chapter 3 . 7/31/2006
Another good poem and my favorite color is red and I like the symbolism here. Hey I added you to my friends list on my space so check it out when you get the chance. I also started posting some of my poems on fictionpress. They are all blank verse poems and are mostly just ramblings of mine. I can't wait to read more of your poems. You inspired me to put mine up on here. I am currently working on chapter three of Dark Society and it should be up soon. Oh yeah, about the confusion thing. After chapter one, which is the mission, Eve is knocked unconscious, so the next few chapters after that is flashbacks of the previous months. The flashbacks are going to talk about her parents death as well as leading up to the mission. Hope that clears everything up for you.
Until Next Time . . . .
| Faithless Juliet chapter 37 . 7/17/2006
Powerful internal dialect. We all wonder about things like this and I doubt that any of us will ever really have the answer that we seek, but expressing it and saying something about it is the best way to hunt for it. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.
| IvyTwine chapter 37 . 7/17/2006
good. i agree but i wouldnt be saying im sorry or i see how they feel. i dont see how they feel. i think (excuse my language) the whole war is bull shit and it is like a living hell. but sory, i was raving on. good poem. i could tell that was how you felt. keep it up.
| GeeGee chapter 37 . 7/17/2006
I understand you point of view.
Let's start with the first thought that came to my mind. The world in the beginning came with no problems no sin of any kind. Unfortunately for man a choice was made for generations to come and sin propagated every where. The first killing reported in the Bible is between two brothers. Over a useless thought. Our world has been cursed to continue this. It is useless to try and solve it all at once. Yes you are right people are dying for the cause. What cause is that you say? Well we all have a cause. What is your's? Some would say war solves everything so that is why they go to war right? Or is that wrong? They stand behind the President and all he will do to protect their country. Many don't question why. You have stopped and thought about this and that's a good thing because you won't be a droon who stands there and waits for things to happen you can make a difference in your life and others. I really like this and am glad that you have opened up this thought process for others to begin questioning why.
| Raymond Lamar Gilstrap chapter 2 . 7/7/2006
Hey. I like to read poems because I am not very good at writing poetry myself although I try and I like this poem because I can relate to how the girl feels in the poem. Good job. I will return and read the other ones later because right now I am trying to figure how I am going to get my car started in the morning. My battery is dead :( But anyways, thanks for reviewing my story. I really appreciate it. Just so you know all of the chapters will be pretty lengthy (what can I say, I am inspired by JK Rowling. LOL!)
| Poemkitten7 chapter 68 . 7/5/2006
Wow, I love all the powerful and strong words you use to describe the emotions within the poem. Very beautifully written!
| missmeghanh chapter 68 . 7/5/2006
wow i really like this
| Samecool11 chapter 61 . 7/5/2006
Ok, this sorta scared me(the title) but it's ok. cause you don't really me you! gosh, you better not...
| Krod155 chapter 55 . 7/5/2006
Wow, this is good. Definitely true.
| Katmufla chapter 53 . 7/5/2006
that's beautiful. i think everyone should write something like this to their moms. what a great thing!
| Jitterrue chapter 47 . 7/5/2006
Such lovely imagery
| kyle jordan chapter 19 . 7/5/2006
I like pie!good poem! :)i want to fly too!Chicken is good.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 69 . 7/5/2006
Excellent work - it's a well written poem! Keep writing!
| silence in the dark chapter 68 . 7/5/2006
This was really good. I liked it a lot... it was very ture and well written.
I was wondering though about this line
Did you mean "wrecking trust"? As in ruining trust? Not "wreaking" as in stench?
Thanks for the very kind review!
~the Stranger in the moonlight~
| Princess-anna57 chapter 64 . 7/5/2006
Wow. That was so emotional! So well written. I hope everything turns out okay. Be positive, and keep writing!