|Reviews for The Beating Heart: A collection of Poems|
| Faith8i8 chapter 5 . 7/4/2006
Don't ask much do you? Lol, I'm totally just kidding- I love the poem. :) Very attuned to relationships- not that that's a surprise :)
| Acoustic chapter 4 . 7/4/2006
C'est tres triste, mais belle. That's so sad and tragic, but pretty.
| Allie chapter 3 . 7/4/2006
Ooh, how mysterious! I really don't like the whole dream cliche, but in this case it was alright.
| amethystdawn chapter 2 . 7/4/2006
This poem has potential. There's a story behind it and I can see you're trying to express it but I think you're trying to cram too much info into this poem. It lacks a certain flow. In one part your lines become way too long, then it suddenly shortens. No offense but it seems rather disorganized yet I think with a bit of editing, this could be a great love poem. _ Anyways, keep writing and God bless. *hug* PS: Thanks for all of the reviews! I was so surprised! I'll try to update soon.
PPS:You don't have to advertise me. *blushes* I'm not that good. But thanks anyway and the description for my story is fine. I'm glad you liked it.
PS:you really write a lot, don't you? *looks at all 47 works* Man, you're good.