Reviews for Goodbye Forever
shadowcat86 chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
That was sad, was it based on reality, or fiction?
::Puppy eyes:: wa! its so sad!
Simply Jose chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
wow, amazing, so touching! amazing! I loved it, what does Vita mean bye goodbye? is it as if she is going away somewhere, ckilling herrself, or just gonna ignore him for the rest of her days? this keeps me interested...please clear things up, cuz this is a really good story,and i loved it!
Gollummullog chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Might want to cut out the b/c, because if it sincerely was the last letter ever, don't you think you'd take the care to do everything right? And... is the person moving, or committing suicide? Cause if it's suicide, then you might want to change the writing. Very touching, though. The reader gets a real feel of the story before Nick goes all... strange. I don't know... there's just something about the line 'goodbye forever' that... bothers me. Maybe it's because when I was little I watched this animated movie and this little reindeer wrote this letter to its mom and dad saying goodbye some final comment about love forever and always to emphasize the last line?All in all, a really touching it.-Gollum
itsonlyme07 chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
oh i really like is so sad! saying goodbye is really hard and then not even being able to do it in person is even worse...and worse yet, saying goodbye when you are in sad :( Good job