hey! um, this poem reminds me alot of my story Even In Death. Coz kinda the same same thing happens, ya know. but i liked it. lots of feelings. and the ending was sad. but it was really good. really emotional. keep it up!

This is really beautiful. I loved it!

X Lien

Whoa. i love this poem. it's great. Love is so bad sometimes, but i guess we should look more towards the bright things.

its great... it makes you think about these things- like the pain of love.