Reviews for Sick Cycle Carousel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE that song! Sway by The Perishers, you rock for sending it to me. It's like one of my favs now :D Anyway, WHERE'S MY ANDREW? Oops, he's not mine, Maria has him... aww... heh, Maria rocks for punching Charlie. He's such an asshole for raping an innocent girl like Brooke. I really feel for her, Bright ignoring her and all. But hey, I hope Bright managed to patch things up later! Badd Bright for drinking. They're just in denial... (implants this in head for hope that they REALLY are in denial) LOL! Aww, cliffie again. Writing them is nice, but reading them is urgh, haha! ANDREW BETTER SAY SOMETHING NICE! Um... at least, I hope so... don't let him say something stupid or gape like a goldfish, please? At least Maria's admitting her feelings now, not bottling them up. And that's a good thing ) I have a week more before I officially go on hiatus from the com till the 11th. Grs, I still haven't finished studying for my tests next week. See, I reviewed instead of studying! Nah, I'm sick of anions, haha... Whoo, long review. I'll email you as soon as I finish my studying s get more reviews! You deserve it! And write sooner... I wanna find out... :D |
![]() ![]() omg wow..im luvin the story..i reallie liked how things cleared up about maria's accident in this chapter..ur an amazing writer and keep up the awesome work..and update soon because im dying to find out what will happen next!ciao! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! thanks for reviewing my story. unfortunetly, that one is on some serious hiatus and i probably won't write anything for it ever again. i'm sorry, but i lost inspiration, i 're doing great on this, though. you are an awesome writer. for awhile maria was frustrating me because she kept on pushing and pushing away, but she just needed some time to come around. i'm glad she's changed for the better.i was really excited when jake announced he was moving out too. jake and maria are great siblings and should stay up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() anyways, when r u gonna update? I wanna see more of Bright,... I dunno, maybe coz there's the resemblance between the two of us lol, love the choice of music, seriously, but I can't get "Iris" out of my head, the Goo Goo Dolls version, there's something wrong with Ronan Keating, lol! jk, but someone has it in for me on singing... she said I should've joined, but she's the better singer, I'm stammering dammit, and I hated the Brooke/Bright stuff, seriously, it was too creepy, and that's one of the things I don't have in common with Bright lol. and I say seriously a lot, I know... and I finally got the title, it's a mix of a chain of events... sick cycle carousel... some things happen again, only in a different way... like Maria's dad's accident... see? anyways, update, I'll review once u do! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey hey i really like this story man it's got me captivated yay! you do a good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i cant wait for the next chapter!hope school doesnt keep you away for too long!cheers-sad-billy |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG they found out about her dad and the drinking...Yes. She can't move out on her own ain't she too young? Now Andrew needs to find out about Robbie...dun dun dun lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is actually a really good way of tying up the Maria accident line, or at least starting to as I don't know what will happen later. And it's nice that she's starting to open up to people, very believable.-Kat |
![]() ![]() I really like this chapter. She was able to get a lot of things out in the open and get an independent start in life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I just found it today and am now hooked. All the characters in your story have a lot of depth and it's easy to feel like I am involved in the story. Great writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I'm starving now, but whatever XD Okay, so I LOVE THE LAKE SCENE! Heh... I just love getting the chapter before anyone else. I sound evil! Yay, Beautiful Love is a great song, glad you like The Afters (: Jake is one sweet brother. I want a brother like that, aww... haha, I liked the part where Maria jumps onto him. The 'hoarsely' brings it out just nice! Bah, gotta eat now, my stomach's gonna combust. LOL, TCC Ch2 up soon! Review when you read it! x |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ow my foot is hurting right now... sorry that was pretty random, but OW. THAT HURTS! Okay, the pain's gone now. LOL, sorry! Here I go with my review. When I was reading (and editing) the part where Andrew yells at Maria for coming to his house, I was like 'oh damn, why is Andrew such a jackass?' then later I was like 'YES!' :D that Pamela Anderson cereal thing totally made me crack up. Jake is definitely a weird but funny character (: I wonder where Andrew was planning to take her to before they got interrupted? Hmm... oh, dramatic cliffhanger. I so love writing them, but reading them, NEH! Ahahas... I love Jack's Mannequin! Haha, definitely a great song to go with this chapter. Hope you got my most recent email! Hmm, I'll go write somemore then, or maybe sleep for a while. Sleeping is one's fav pastime, and even more so now that it's raining. Haha! Chapter 13 anybody? D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So...Beau is gone. I never really thought that he fit in with the rest of the thing that I have to keep on remembering is that Andrew is 21 and Maria is 16. It's hard to do sometimes but it's ...The dad was drunk. That explains most things. One question though, why did he not fly through the window when they crashed?-Kat |
![]() ![]() ![]() yo yo! yep i loved this chapter.. good twist with the father! interesting as well, i was wondering about the bad relationship there.. there hasnt been much of the parents in the story.. anyway, cant wait for the next chapter!cheers- sad-billy :) |