Reviews for Sick Cycle Carousel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey,im really enjoying your story so far,its different from most stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An implication of Robbie, that's totally rad... Bright, you rule! Haha I hope to see more of Andrew, woohoo... I haven't beta-ed Chapt 4 I am TOTALLY busy, I still have to go to school tomorrow on a Sat! How bad is that? Anyway, I'll beta Chapt 4 ASAP! Keep writing! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was attracted by the title: Sick Cycle Carousel, just because I LOVE that song! Lifehouse rocks! And so does Something Corporate! Anyway, I really like this story, it's not like one of those cutesy stories out there. It actually has raw emotion in it and all. It's pretty sad the way Maria's dad changes after the crash... Oh, and if you're still interested in a beta, I'm one... though from what I've been reading, you don't really need one, but you could email me if you want ) Update soon! Very nice story here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. I like it. |
![]() ![]() Hey there, Great writing... Your charachters are alive and the story is full of emotions... When is chapter 2 coming up? Francesca (poet) |
![]() ![]() Wasn't this story already posted a while ago? I'm can't wait for the second chapter |