Reviews for Sick Cycle Carousel
ibjuicen chapter 20 . 4/1/2007
OMG YOU UPDATED! i almost forgot about you story but then u updated! ur so awesome. i'm happy my last review got you... um inspired? lol anyways. this chapter was juicy but i'm glad you didn't rush maria and andrew's relationship. its going great. i'm sorry to hear about ur dad and i wish him luck and you too. i understand the whole time thingy so take ur time with the next chapter, i won't hate you lol. but you so need to just update! [ awesome chapter once again. o i can't wait! next chapter is gonna be so juicy lol.
SunriseGoodbyes chapter 20 . 4/1/2007
nice. ]

your story reminded me of what happened to my friend when we were back stage during intermission of our play called "Anything Goes". Someone was gunna ask my friend out and it took like literally five minutes of interupptions before he gave up on the idea.

I read your author's note at the bottom. Kinda same thing happened to me...except with my sister. I hope your dad's doing well.

My sister only needs radiation and then she can go back to school...if its not too close to the end of the year.

Well bye, I'm not sure if I'll update "Kinky Memories" anytime soon but I wont give up on it...but I think I might redo the whole story after I'm done. ]
BatteredSoul chapter 20 . 4/1/2007
NEW READER here. xD love this story hope you update soon. ,33 xD
Ginne chapter 20 . 4/1/2007
I hope for the best for you and your family. Good luck
SunriseGoodbyes chapter 19 . 3/17/2007
sorry I havent commeted in forever. I still love your story. ]

I hope you update soon too!
arouralai chapter 18 . 2/12/2007
i know that this might seem sick and twisted to you (the author) but is jake gay...please DON'T hate me...it's just with the whole "manly" handshake thing, justin timberlake, and the dating the bimbos...he remindes me of a character in a book i read...

GREAT JOB!

PLZ DON'T hate me!
arouralai chapter 19 . 2/12/2007
wow! this story is flippin amazing! GREAT JOB! i can't belive i didn't find this sooner!
angels and effects chapter 19 . 1/31/2007
Oh my God, I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier! I think I forgot, what with school and all :s

Anyway, it really shouldn't affect you that not many people have reviewed so far - this chapter ROCKED :) for a first, Andrew's dad is not so aversed towards Maria any more! And Bright and Brooke got together, which was totally sweet by the way. Sad at the beginning, but not everything is happy in love. Er, I guess so. And Andrew & Maria had their first fight and Maria got over her scars... wow, that's a lot happening in this chapter. What can I say? The Justin thing is seriously funny, I laughed for god knows how long when you sent me the chapter. :)

Ok I gotta go study. I wasn't even supposed to come online, lol. I'll email you in the night, just came home from school. Physics is an exhuastingly infuriating subject x(

Louisa
Skeeter the Groundhog chapter 19 . 1/28/2007
yay! i was rooting for bright. he's amazing. when the story is done, can i keep him? i promise i'llt ake good care of him. he can stay in the garage and i'll feed him and take him on walks and make sure he takes a bath and goes ot school and i'll sing him a lullabye before he goes to bed...
Duccia chapter 19 . 1/27/2007
Lades and Gentlemen, we are gathered here in this afternoon to say our last goodbye to a beautiful( *cough* cough*) person (?) who was dear to us: goodbye my dear Conscience, we'll miss you... (*insert tears and desperation here...*)...

So... Now that the bitc... I mean, my lovely conscience who always tried to save my sinning soul from the eternal damnation, is dead and buried ( what? Don't look at me, it's not my fault... She slipped on a banana skin who "someone" had "accidentally" thrown on the ground... See? Not my fault at all) ... LET's GET THE PARTY STARTED!

Go Maria go! Her confrontation with Andrew's dad was great... That girl has guts!

AND HE SAW THE LIGHT! Finally Bright realized how such a jerk he was being with Brooke and he forgave her! They're too cute together... Don't we all love happy endings?

OMG, are you trying to kill me? I thought you "LOVED" me! You made me almost choke on my chips with the "Sexyback" dance... Jake in front of the mirror checking his ass... Pf...pf... Mwaahahahah!

The scene in the hot tub... Hehe... My dirty mind is racing... Ok, stop or soon I'll need a cold shower... I'm glad that finally Maria got over all her fears... Little by little she's growin up... We can see the development of her character during all the story, and that's something I particurarly like of it, because it makes everything more realistic...

Oh, oh...Sex talk... This should be interesting... Seems that someone likes the idea of makin the "beast with two backs"... ( that's the Duccia-ish for sex... Don't worry, they're planning on make dictionaries that soon will be on sale.. )

One last thing... I noticed that your writing is really improved since the beginning of SCC, you should be really proud of yourself... Keep up your great work my freaky friend, I'll be here waiting for you!

X

Duccia ;)
sad-billy chapter 19 . 1/27/2007
hey this chapter is very lovey dovey lol. not that thats a bad thing! noo.. but a lot of stuff is being worked out and thats good.. im glad maria is getting over self consciousness about her scars, i think thats fantastic. not sure about bright and brooke though, it all seemed too easy. plus, i think maria shouldnt have interfered as much as she did, even though she did help them sort it out(like what if bright really didnt want her back?) but yea.. i guess you can say that maria isnt my fave character though i guess that happens a lot with the main character in a story... i like jake heaps.. and andrew, hes sweet.. anyway, thumbs up for another great chapter!

cheers,

sad-billy
that's way chill chapter 19 . 1/27/2007
Hey Lien! this was an awesome chapter...i'm so glad bright and brooke finally got back together! it's about time...lol...oh didn't i already tell you that i'm stealing drew from you? cause if i haven't told you that..well i'm telling you now! lol..i loved this chappie...can't wait for the next chapter cause i wanna see drew's reaction! lol...update when you get a chance love!

xoxo

Jess
ibjuicen chapter 19 . 1/26/2007
OMG! GO GO GO! UPDATE! omg. i just spent the past like 3-4 hours reading this story. and omg. i have to say this is one of the best stories i've read in such a long time! i thought it was sappy at first but then it got so good! HURRY UP AND UPDATE! i know i didn't stay up till 3 in the morning just to know you won't finish it! GO!
pinkfairydust chapter 19 . 1/26/2007
oh my god! i love this story - so far! i read it all in one morning!

i love the lyrics at the end and how you thread humor into it as well :D

update!

jaz-xx
CreepSneakPounce chapter 18 . 1/11/2007
I'm back! xD

btw, I only read the last 2 chapters now, been busy lately, sort of... and I didn't get an e-mail, I think. just put it on the review reply or, put it as a foot-note... I just want to know what you think about it. And this chapter, is a lighter than any other chapter. Great job! I loved how Maria hissed at Robbie, totally deserves it... Matt... will he come back?... Andrew... what else is gonna happen?... Bright, any more, random Jedi-master talk? xD or girls...?

anywho, update!

our creepy CL/VE teacher made this footnote for getting a perfect score...

I got a perfect score in the seatwork, mabuhay!

0,0; crappy stuff... will someone get him to stfu!
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