|Reviews for As Only You Can See|
| silentscreamer07 chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
I LOVED THIS! This was just...wow..amazing. Really, it was.
I loved the questions in them too...they really made you think..as if somebody you really knew was asking you those...and they made you think...I liked that.
"If one warning would suffice; Would you take it in a hearbeat?"
Good question...I loved it!
And your last stanza was...*gasp* just wow!
"Try and try, don't stay down/Fly and see the world/As only you can see..."
I love ne thing to do with flying..in a poem...and this just had a really good message...*kw*
| asdfasdfafsa chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Aw, another beautiful poem. This is so pretty. The language you used in it was just perfect. My favourite part is the 3rd paragraph. Really wonderful! ~Alice:D~