|Reviews for Haunting Smile|
| Wylloa chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
This poem showed so much, and i appreciate how hard it was to write it, as it is often hard for peple to write straite from the heart.
I have three poems that hurt so bad to write, i almost didnt write them- take a look at them some time- their called " Whats Left of Me, Cold Lying Lips, and Twisted Emptyness"
Keep up the good work!
| from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
That is so sad. I don't know if this is personal experience or not, but it really is awful how people treat each other. But this is a very expressive piece with a lot of raw emotions and I like that about it. You should check out my poem "Between the Raindrops"