Reviews for Twisted
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
"Oh, yes, trashed." - LOVE that line (times a million) and just found it a perfect way to end this poem; it fits perfecty, really.

~* Noelle
bitterpaper chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Wow..this rings so true to me, how people will throw away good things because...well, for all sorts of reasons. I think this was written beautifully and really makes a person think...
Bomee chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
lovely :) turning flowers into sex. very creative! i can hear this poem as a song, keep up the good work!
KG Jonta chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Sounds like she's a street smart hoe.
x account closed x chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Wow this is amazing!Would love to meet the person its was an EXCELLENT piece of work! Congrats!