Reviews for Waste
Dragonslostchild chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Though this is so short, it still manages to strike a deep chord. It isn't just a shallow poem- something that randomly popped into your head. I can feel and imagine a complete story hidden beneath it.

It was interesting how you made the transition from the beginning- "blood runs thicker"- to "blood runs thinner" in the end.

Anyway, very nice.

DLC
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Going from blood runs thicker to blood runs thinner.. almost as if I could feel myself draining away.

"All those wasted years..." a very good ending. Completes the feeling and leaves you to no more ponder if it was all your fault, but states it as a fact.

Very well written!