aww this story is great!

Bryce so sweet.. and funny. heheh

update soon!

It was cute! I wish a guy like Bryce would come along and actually comply to the list. It would save me the heartache. Even though your stories have errors, it was really cute. Definitely worth reading.

I love that poem and its corniness. It's awesome. Hope you're going to write more to this story, I want to know what happens next.

This is a very interesting idea. And the beginning is well written; it leaves me wanting to read more.

Great chapter! Can't wait to see the other things on the list, and the how-melina-got-bryce-and-vice-versa story was amusing! Haha, Melina sure has control over Bryce! I guess i sorta like that. well, update soon please!

Wow! That was hilarious and I really like the Melina-having-control-of-Bryce thing! In fact, it amused me! Update soon, please!

Ahh. Finally got around to reading this chapter. xD Ahh, the poem was cute. It made me laugh.

Hmm. I liked this chapter a bit more than the last two, even. Always a good sign, to get progresively better. Your style is very lighht, very readable. I didn't really read for grammar, so I'm going to leave it alone. Anything too egregious will be caught by others, I suppose.

Umm...the bold things are, I'm guessing, scene breaks? I don't know if I would use text for that. Just because I was a little confused. A first, I thought they were part of the poem. But, if that's what you really want, who am I to stand in the way?

Hm..what else to say...Melina's a bit fickle. She was so angry, but is now so happy. Perhaps a bit abrupt. I mean, if she still likes him this much, why should she care if he finishes the list or break up with him? It seems a little grudge-like. But, then again, we haven't seen too much of her still. Whatever. I still really like it. Hope you ocntinue soon, since this story makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside...or something like that...

Gata

Yay! I'm glad you updated! Ooh, smart move not letting Bryce give Melina that 1st poem...that would not have been pretty. Haha. Hmm, I wonder what the rain has to do with anything. Anyway, I look forward to the next chappie! Ciao!~10Shrazad01~

OMFG, NMS! I LOVE THIS! Personally, I didn't think it was that corny. I mean, come on, isn't Melina's whole love list pretty corny anyway? So, it just kind of fits in. OMG. I can't get over it. That was so funny. So, when he got his first rhyme, I was like "That's a rhyme." And then he got it! I was like a total mind reader or something. Anyway, I absolutely loved this. The poem was PERFECTLY corny. Such a guy thing. Melina's so cute. (Don't know what's up with her name...but, that's okay.) You left such a cliffhanger, you bum. I love this and you BETTER update soon!

Okay what a guy. I mean most of them would have given up at the Serenade part and not gone through, but he is. Aww. This is cute and fun. I can't wait for your update so please do quickly. As for the little cliff hanger at the end, I'm on the edge of my seat wishing that if I closed my eyes chapter 4 would apear. It isn't now, but it should soon, right? jk no story and thanks for the reviews, btw I went back and did some editing of those first four chapters, so if you want to check'em out, feel free to do so.

~ Lacy

Lol! It's really fun and cute. )

I liked this chapter a lot. The description seems to have improved. Anyway, great job and update soon.

This is pretty good so far. I would just like to point out a few things though. Numbers less than 100 should be spelled out. There were also a few typos. Like "girl friend" should be one word and so should "jack ass."

I like the whole scene where you're switching point of views. It is kind of confusing though since it's the type of thing you would only see in a movie, not a novel. But I still liked it. It was interesting.

Anyway, I really like this story so far and I'll continue reading.

Ah, I was checking my reviews and saw that you reviewed all my stories.

And that I haven't checked out any of yours.

So I decided to, and I'm glad I did. This story is really cute. I have got to try that one day.

If I ever get a boyfriend.

Ah, I'm jealous though. Their parents are cool. If my parents saw a guy out my window, they'd call the police. And throw rocks at him or something. :p