Reviews for He and Me
kj236 chapter 15 . 12/6/2009
yay! finished! it was so good... :D :D :D :D :D :D

1. My favourite scene/s were the ones with Justin... :) especially when he always knew how to make her feel better.

2. I don't really have a most memorable line... except 'I'd much rather make-out with you than with Riley', that was a good one.:D

3. Favourite character HAD to be Justin. Much much love. :)

4. I liked the way it finished- the last scene wasn't dragged out like some other writers do.

5. You couldn't really tell... you write really well. :D


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kj236 chapter 11 . 12/6/2009
no! I wanted Riley to fall in love with Justin! no! i guess i'll have to settle for ryan then... :(

still a brilliant story.


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kj236 chapter 6 . 12/6/2009
oh... loving it! only started it tonight... but its amazing!

much love...

one question though... how does ryan know riley's family and why is it acceptable for him to just turn up and spend the night? i'm confused.

i love the whole 'boy hates girl, girl hates boy, get to know each other and eventually fall in love' romance story ( know that's not how it is in this case, but still)... :D

i look forward to the rest of it! :D
rathina chapter 15 . 11/30/2009
i adore r\this story

i loved the first kiss before sarah walked in

my favorite line was "Ryan, you had it totally wrong the whole time ‘cause well, I’d much rather make out with you than with Riley.”

favorite character was Justin and Brandon

loved how it was wrapped up but would have liked to see how the boys reacted to it

i thought you had written more stories from this story

it was amazing

keep up the good work

Arrocha Semotis Vir chapter 15 . 11/16/2009
Wow, this is a great story!

1) My favorite scene would have to be when Riley and Ryan make out in the pantry.

2)The most memorable line for me would be, “I would just like to say congrats to you two. And well, Ryan, you had it totally wrong the whole time ‘cause well, I’d much rather make out with you than with Riley.” It's just hilarious.

3) My favorite character would have to be Ryan.

4) Yes, I felt the ending wrapped everything up. Sarah and Riley made up, Riley and Ryan got together, and Justin revealed the fact that he is gay.

5) I don't believe you, this is too good to be done by a first time writer. Unless you had a good beta reader.

No spelling/grammar errors spotted!

Sorry this review is so long.

Keep writing, I can't wait to read more!
rawriitsmar chapter 14 . 11/10/2009
okay i've already reviewed chapter 15 of this story so i'm gonna have to say my piece here. i read your story likee a billion years ago. ok no im kidding, but it was around the time when you finished it or whatevers. i just finished rereading the entire thing again. lemme tell you, i felt like i had never read it (probably cuz it was so long ago) and i LOVED it even more this time around. it's such a cute & funny cliche. great job !
xFireLilly18x chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
I like it so far. your writing style makes me laugh, and it's refreshing.
balloonfista chapter 15 . 11/7/2009
So cute. Love Ryan and Riley!

tifferz92413 chapter 15 . 11/1/2009
Answer some questions if you want- I’m really interested in knowing what you guys thought:

1. What was your favorite scene?

the scene were she was about to rape justin hahha hilarious

2. What’s the most memorable line in the story?

justin-"I would just like to say congrats to you two. And well, Ryan, you had it totally wrong the whole time ‘cause well, I’d much rather make out with you than with Riley.”

3. Who was your favorite character?

Def. justin everybody should have a gay best friend

4. Did you feel the ending wrapped everything up?


5. Could you tell I was a first-time writer?

not really it was pretty well written
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 15 . 10/30/2009
love it!
Cullen Dae chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
This was a great story; I really liked it! Very well written and I loved the storyline. Riley was by far my favorite character. :) Good job!
annne chapter 15 . 10/19/2009
I loved this story so sweet. You did a great job and really enjoyed your writing. Please write more stories like these they are my guilty pleasure lol. Thanks
EmeliaLuff chapter 15 . 10/17/2009
ithinkyourgay chapter 12 . 10/3/2009
oh i wonder wats going to happen next.

good stuff so far
castiel89 chapter 15 . 10/2/2009
Okay, so I just recently saw your story on another author's fave list and I just had to read it.

I finished it in one go...I was up until 3 am reading it i just couldn't stop!

My heart broke and lept for joy whenever Riley's did. So good job in making me about to cry at certain times (both bad and happy tears!)
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