| Reviews for He and Me |
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  DCheerfulwitcher chapter 15 . 5/16/2009 I love it! Though I may say that the story's a bit cliche - well everyone knows, who cares? - but I find it interesting. But I somehow I just happen to dislike Riley a bit not to mention that she was just so slow and bit of a retard when she felt like her life was too complicated but sometimes I find it alright so things can be interesting. I love the last part when Justin admitted that he is gay! LOL I swear that I could imagine Ryan's face after Justine said that! LOL Anyway, great job! I will read the rest of your other works then! mY FAV. character is Brandon cause he is the only one who never has any problems in this story. But here's a note, he's a freaking baby! What else do you expect from a toddler? LOL My most memorable line will be the "I'm gay" sentence coming from Justin! It's soo cool! So anyway, keep up the good work, Alyssa! |
| cynthian chapter 1 . 5/15/2009 her life became a cliche after you made it one. LOL sorry had to :3 cute. |
| georgie chapter 11 . 5/15/2009 Yeh, slightly obvious that Justin was gay, "I honestly didn’t mean to try and fit you into those stupid stereotypes" um you do realise that that's kinda what you did right? I mean liking "the Notebook", not being good at sports, a slightly flamboyant sense of humour (ok i'm mainly thinking about the apron thing here)etc |
| kcat chapter 3 . 5/15/2009 THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR NOT MAKING THEM MARRY EACH OTHER! I will actually love you forever just for that! Even amidst every cliche known to man :D (which I'm sure you know about and are absolved from due to this and the not making them marry each other thing). Seriously you have restored my faith in humanity! Thank you! |
 amezz chapter 15 . 5/9/2009 Awe! This was really good! I'm so glad that they got together in the end! I totally called Justin being gay, like right when he said 'you'll make some other guy really happy.' I was so happy when I was right! I really enjoyed your story, the chemistry between the characters was really good. And the corn quirk that Riley had really added something to the story. Very funny, and kinda random, I've never heard of anyone who likes corn that much!:)Very good job, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories! |
| ookami-tamashii chapter 4 . 5/7/2009 OMG XD i laughed so damn hard reading this chapter lol. GREAT JOB :D |
| righthere431 chapter 6 . 4/18/2009 lol aw Ryan is so sweet with Brandon! |
| righthere431 chapter 5 . 4/18/2009 Ooh! I want to go to a carnival now! lol. |
| righthere431 chapter 4 . 4/18/2009 Ahaha cute scene. Ryan is a little demanding lol. |
| righthere431 chapter 3 . 4/18/2009 Lol oh man, I was hoping she would get paired up with Ryan. |
| featherstone13 chapter 15 . 4/14/2009 I love it and the funny obsesion with the corn! I love stories like these where the girls falls in love with some one she along with everyone eles expected Feather's |
| CharlotteBradhadair chapter 15 . 4/12/2009 i really liked. it was really funny. charlotte |
| you're-my-shooting-star chapter 15 . 3/16/2009 Aww this was so cute) I loved it |
| 20 chapter 4 . 2/16/2009 the flour incident was really funny. |
| pretitiful chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 :) haha. love derek already. soo cute |