had lot of fun reading it (:

Love the story! And Justin, he really knows how to ease the tension! Lol Couldn't stop reading! Amazing!
Megan :)

Great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :) xxx

Ah, I absolutely love this story! Amazing! My favourite scene has to be when Riley and Ryan were in the bathroom and they were both soaked and she straddled him... I just loved that. My favourite character in a way was Derek, I like his comments. The ending was perfect. I couldn't tell you were a first-time writer, that's amazed me!
Favourite line: 'put the baby down and step back'.

OMG! I LOVE THE LAST PARAGRAPH! Justin is hilarious :P

P.S.) corn is AMAZING

great

Wow. Just wow. Well, that was quite some story. I liked it a lot, maybe because I'm a big cliche fan, too. :) But to answer your questions, my favorite scene would probably have to be the rain and when they both fell. I don't know...I just like rain. Haha. Most memorable line...hmm...I think this is definitely Justin's "I'd much rather make out with you than with Riley." That cracked me up so much! And I think that was a great way to end the story. Favorite character...I'd say Justin. I love how he's chill and is always there to help Riley. The ending wrapped up everything pretty well. There weren't any loopholes left unfilled so I'd say you're good. Last but not least, NO, I was NOT able to tell you were a first time writer. That was a surprise, actually. But, you know, overall everything was great. So I applaud you! I shall never doubt the power of corn.

I really loved this short little story I love the whole concept of brothers best friend so great job

Btw I love corn!

just ignore that last reveiw, pleasepleaseplease, or laugh at my idocracy...

you spelled fried not friend... nice to know that J is her fried :)

Hello, I easily forget things and I just read this last month and I already forgot what it is about until I read the description and I read the word "corn" and I remembered the story. Haha. Very unique. :))) I'm ndagutierrez by the way.

I for one have an obsession with anything that concerns corn. And I totally feel Riley's urges for it. ))) Canned Corn is really good you know!

Anyway, that was a perfect ending. :)) I love Justiin! Although I wished Justin did kiss Riley and then said something like "Oh my god I must be a lesbian now" HAHA! Too bad he had to be GAY. :)) But I love it as it is. Great story and characters. All of them are loveable especially Riley and Justin! :)

Mmmm... I'd have to say my favorite line was the last! When Justin says, "And well, Ryan, you had it totally wrong the whole time 'cause well, I'd much rather make out with you than with Riley." I wish we could see Ryan's reaction to that! ;)

Cute story! I just love it! 3

perfect