Reviews for He and Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What the heck is a cliche? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH GOD! This story has a LOT of reviews. How? Wow that was a really stupid question. It's because you're a good writer. Obviously |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm dissapointed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW! THAT WS BEAUTIFUL! |
![]() ![]() I don't have an account here, and I RARELY leave reviews...but I just couldn't help myself! I hope you don't believe anyone who says your story was POORLY written! Far from it! No, I couldn't tell you were a first-time writer! I've read more than a 100 fanfictions on the other site...and these days it's so hard to find something you can continue beyond the 1st chapter...but you had me hooked since the very beginning! I loved your story...and all the characters were PERFECT! I didn't find a single turn off! Very well written. I hope you continue writing. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this story:) i also love corn:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, that was sweet! So sweet. I almost gave up because it just seemed so slow, but obvious and kind of poorly written. Riley seems so immature and baby like, always depending on other people. I think the last chapter is where she grew alot, even though it was everyone elses idea and not hers. I think it was great of her to grow some balls and admit that she loved him. Absolutely love Ryan. Hands down. He's amazing. Um, yeah, I think that's about it. Thanks a lot! Signed: wakeyourdreamz |
![]() ![]() I . your story! I don't like reading anymore than 10 chapters but from the second chapter I was hooked! Good plot. Characters realistic. Funny. Romantic. Amazing! :) . beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved and enjoyed this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Five years later, and this story still stands strong :) I loved it! Keep on writing, cause your great at it :D |
![]() ![]() I Love This Story He Little Brother So Funny And Cute Your A Really Good Writer Keep Up The Great Work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahaha! I love Justin! XD hahah thanks so much for this awesome cute story! Though it was weird how Ryan wasn't really helping when Kate was bashing Riley... and then says stuff like, I can't just let it go when someone does that to you... ehh. w/e :P hahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao i love your end note and what Justin says at the end of the story and your whole story . I love all of your stories and your a spectacular author :D i really hope your finish your other stories too :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao im guessing someone's gonna get jealous *cough*Ryan*cough* lol i love Riley's corn obssesion :) but damn canned corn is good :D ... well the seperated really yummy ones :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to say that i'm pretty much a sap and i loved your story :D |