Reviews for He and Me
j.murda06 chapter 2 . 7/6/2006
Hey, I know I said this before, but this story is really cute. You should definitely keep up with it. Don't worry about people who complain that it's cliche. It's good, and that's all that matters. Plus, if we didn't have cliches, what would we have? Update soon!P.S. You really should watch Friends. It's one of the best shows ever (next to Grey's Anatomy and Sex and the City, of course).
Lady in Disguise chapter 2 . 7/6/2006
Hey I'm a romantic cliche lover as well. I think it's great you decided to write one.
j.murda06 chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
i think this is such a cute story and you should definitely keep writing it. i know it's cliche, but i like that stuff too. don't give up on this story, it's pretty good.
McQuinn chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Guh. A lot of cliches being used. Not only the plot line itself, but the way the characters act, look, speak. I dunno. I guess I was trying to look for something different, but didn't find it - not in this chapter, at least.

I'm looking forward to a possible improvement next chapter, though - so keep writing. :P

prolific bunny chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
very cliche but i'll read it anyway. :) hope you update soon!
Lady in Disguise chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
You should for sure continue. I already like the story and I've only read the first chapter. I'll be looking for an update!
howw do you delete an account chapter 1 . 7/6/2006

I like cliches too, don't worry.

Anyway, well written!

I can't really give any constructive criticism (only one chapter...y'know, it's awkward...) but it sounds pretty cool so far.

I think that you might have started it just a litle too fast though.
nostalgicEXPLOSION chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Love the story so far... LOL... It's hilarious. Gorgeous work.
MKREE chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
It's an overused and abused plot, but you've got a chance to give it some fresh life. :-) Go for it!

~K Ree
aznqt09 chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Please continue the story! I love these kind of stories and i want to know what Ryan plans to do to Riley!
Love Trend chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Cute story, so far! I hope you continue it.
hollyg20 chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
I would be interested to see you continue this. I think your main character has a really good narrative voice. It's really makes me feel like I'm listening to one of my friends talk! It's a nice first attempt :) I hope you decide to post some more.
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