Reviews for He and Me |
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![]() ![]() 1. What was your favorite scene? everytime ryan got jelous of justin :P 2. What's the most memorable line in the story? "Wow Riley, I didn't know you liked it on top. I'll have to keep that in mind." 3. Who was your favorite character? Ryan, duhh (; 4. Did you feel the ending wrapped everything up? cheesy but i definitely love justin's part and kate's smack talking. 5. Could you tell I was a first-time writer? nope ! but you did use the same few adjectives a lot... but i'm just weird like that for noticing xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah i know im like extremly late reviewing on this story, i saw it was made in 2006 i think :S buut i just saw it on someones page and i thought it was amazing. i abouslutly loved it, no words left to desrcibe it :) love love love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved iT! |
![]() ![]() i liked your story though i was disapointed at the end when riley had to make the effort to get with ryan, i thought that it would have been nice if ryan was the one who initiated the whole happy ending. anyway good one still...wouldnt have read it if it wasnt lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm watching the food network right now! It is awesome. :) I like all the different facets of Ryan's personality.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Justin, but i seem to get the feeling that he may be gay. I'll keep reading to find out. :) You have done a great job so far. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm totally lovin' this story so far. :') I thought for SURE it'd be Riley who ended up with Ryan for the "marriages." Ah well. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story :) I loved the cliche and it was very sweet. No, I couldn't tell you were a first time writer... Good job! Cute ending! I love Justin :) Fave character. I liked this story overall a lot! -polkadotzzeaturfaceup |
![]() ![]() ![]() Justin is amazing. THE PERFECT GAY BEST FRIEND! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey great story!, though it seemed kind of rushed... But ya, really good! Yaya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was AWESOME! :) It was a little on the short side but it was stilol totally and utterly amazing! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was REALLY intense! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never mind about the whole Sarah/Justin deal. I feel really embarressed now. :( Anyways, your story is progressing realy nicely! :) Keep up the great work! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite honestly I think that Justin should be with Sarah not Reilly. I have just started this story but I will be leaving you a review at the end to tell you what I think! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok well... 1. the scene where Kate was telling Riley off and she cried. i was crying just as much as Riley was. i'm so emotional its not even funny. that scene was just so sad and i loved it. 2. "Ok everyone! Listen up…come on. Settle down now. Class! Everyone? SHUT UP!" xD 3. Riley cuz shes obsessed with corn |