Reviews for He and Me
colene chapter 15 . 8/18/2010
1. What was your favorite scene? everytime ryan got jelous of justin :P

2. What's the most memorable line in the story? "Wow Riley, I didn't know you liked it on top. I'll have to keep that in mind."

3. Who was your favorite character? Ryan, duhh (;

4. Did you feel the ending wrapped everything up? cheesy but i definitely love justin's part and kate's smack talking.

5. Could you tell I was a first-time writer? nope ! but you did use the same few adjectives a lot... but i'm just weird like that for noticing xD
do not click chapter 15 . 8/16/2010
ah i know im like extremly late reviewing on this story, i saw it was made in 2006 i think :S buut i just saw it on someones page and i thought it was amazing. i abouslutly loved it, no words left to desrcibe it :) love love love!
Novella Vialli chapter 15 . 8/14/2010
Loved iT!
sarah chapter 15 . 7/25/2010
i liked your story though i was disapointed at the end when riley had to make the effort to get with ryan, i thought that it would have been nice if ryan was the one who initiated the whole happy ending. anyway good one still...wouldnt have read it if it wasnt lol.
Badger In Disguise chapter 7 . 7/15/2010
I'm watching the food network right now! It is awesome. :) I like all the different facets of Ryan's personality.:)
Badger In Disguise chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
I like Justin, but i seem to get the feeling that he may be gay. I'll keep reading to find out. :) You have done a great job so far. :)
Sweet.Linda chapter 3 . 7/5/2010
I'm totally lovin' this story so far. :')

I thought for SURE it'd be Riley who ended up with Ryan for the "marriages." Ah well. xD
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooope chapter 15 . 7/2/2010
Great story :) I loved the cliche and it was very sweet. No, I couldn't tell you were a first time writer... Good job! Cute ending! I love Justin :) Fave character.

I liked this story overall a lot!

-polkadotzzeaturfaceup
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooope chapter 14 . 7/2/2010
Justin is amazing. THE PERFECT GAY BEST FRIEND! :D
alamodie chapter 15 . 6/24/2010
Hey great story!, though it seemed kind of rushed... But ya, really good! Yaya!
Bubbly Girl chapter 15 . 6/22/2010
This story was AWESOME! :) It was a little on the short side but it was stilol totally and utterly amazing! :)



~Bubbly Girl
Bubbly Girl chapter 12 . 6/22/2010
Wow, that was REALLY intense! :)



~Bubbly Girl
Bubbly Girl chapter 11 . 6/22/2010
Never mind about the whole Sarah/Justin deal. I feel really embarressed now. :( Anyways, your story is progressing realy nicely! :) Keep up the great work! :)



~Bubbly Girl
Bubbly Girl chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
Quite honestly I think that Justin should be with Sarah not Reilly. I have just started this story but I will be leaving you a review at the end to tell you what I think! :)



~Bubbly Girl
LateNightTurtle chapter 15 . 6/13/2010
ok well...

1. the scene where Kate was telling Riley off and she cried. i was crying just as much as Riley was. i'm so emotional its not even funny. that scene was just so sad and i loved it.

2. "Ok everyone! Listen up…come on. Settle down now. Class! Everyone? SHUT UP!" xD

3. Riley cuz shes obsessed with corn
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