Reviews for challenge me
by His blood chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
you're not pathetic at all. you wrote this perfectly & so, so beautifully, and i know exactly how this feels.
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Just let go away...I think I should take a leaf out of your book...lovely piece. I esp. loved the verses 'for over a year,you consumed me, causing me to bleed, forcing me to vomit, and starting the tears'. Great work.

Annaece

p.s. you're not pathetic. she is.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Beautiful.

Just so powerful and vivid and amazing; I love it.

* Noelle