|Reviews for Rainbow|
| meh chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
good poem, sounds like there is some forced rhyming though, but still good
| Needa S chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Great flow, awesome write.
| drippingdreams chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
It's really pretty! You've misused you're, though. Everywhere you typed you're it should've been your (without the contraction). "You're" "you are" so when you read through your writing, replace you'res and yours with "you are", and if the sentence still makes sense then "you're" is the correct form. If it doesn't make sense, "your" is the correct form. :) Other than that minor technicality, very nice poem. Great imagery.