Reviews for The Beast
DynamicEquilibrium chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
I don't know if I would have to know you to know who it is you're talking about, but it really draws me in. I was lost in your words, and your rythmes weren't stupid, like some I have encountered, they actually made sense, and left you with the feelings the narrator is going through. I can almost picture it as if you're talking about yourself, and what you've been through, but I know nothing about your life, so I wouldn't know what you're like. Great poem though, I could feel it the whole time. The repetition really brought it out as well.

-Dynamic Equilibrium
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
Well I could not guess who it was about, maybe a if they knew you is what you meant, I think I know who it is now.