Reviews for Of Dragon Birth
Mecha019er chapter 7 . 2/15/2007
this is an overall great story, i'm no expert on grammar but i do see some errors, the plot though is what keeps me interested so please continue to write more of this. i would like to see how this all turns out
evil-kenshin chapter 3 . 7/22/2006
woops now i feel stupid, my mistake, i misread (i thought they were the assemble infront of their own element not hte opposite) sorry
evil-kenshin chapter 5 . 7/22/2006
good chapter but you mucked the charachters up, in the last chapter it was shu han that was fire, and kylie that was water, but in this chapter its the oposite
evil-kenshin chapter 4 . 7/19/2006
great story so far, can't wait for the update , though i wonder how it will effect him once he relises everything
DriftBlood chapter 4 . 7/19/2006
its not really my style but i love the story line!