Interesting chapter...Very well written, a few mistakes here and there...but, overall it was good.

Keep up the good work!

~Miyako

is this the main guy from nur something? that group in your other story, fallen angel? is this the story of that him guy and alexia? woah, never knew she fell in love with all four of them! even lewain? or something?

Great start!

Oh that does sound good! You most update soon.